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Nothing to do?

Mon Nov 30, 2009, 3:31 PM
This is just something that, suddenly, I felt like doing. Then I was typing. It's just some story I suddenly came up with, first time I do something like this. So don't bother reading it if you have better things to do. And it may be bad, but don't copy it, please. Comments are very welcome.
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The window

She woke up at the same time as she always do, she opens the window and feels the cold breeze to wake up. The sky is gray, the clouds look like crying, again. No birds sing. It's a really calm and quiet morning.

The cat breaks the silence, asking for food. He only came back to eat, lazy Bob. She fills his pot up, he eats then leave; lazy cat. The company lasted less than ten minutes, yet it was good. But something's different.

She was feeling incredibly normal, everything was where it should be, nothing changed. Things were so usual that she started feeling weird. The silence started bothering her. The house wasn't big. One bedroom, a confortable and warm living room, a small kitchen and a clean bathroom.

Again, the silence was interrupted. But wait, this is a strange sound... what is it? It sounded like a big object falling on the floor, which made an even louder noise for being a floor made of wooden. "Oh my" - she thought, "Bobby, is that you?" she asked with a low voice. No answer. Of course, how would the cat say "hey it's me!". She felt silly, and yet she was starting to sweat, when suddenly the bell rang. "Damn!". That scared her to death. She goes to the door, looking around carefully. She slowly unlocks the old door, wich it's sound made her feel chills on the back of her neck. Afraid, she took an umbrella and hoping that there's nothing weird waiting on the other side of the door. She stands by it, hesitating, thinking how foolish she was acting. Her hand oppened only pulled the door a little; "Now let's put the face outside".
"One, two... thr.. three!". She looks around, nothing. When she looked down, "AHHHHHHHH!", she smashed the door. Stupid rat! But why was a rat... whatever, they're disgusting.

Geez. The tea is cold, she drinks it anyway. She started to calm down. The sky started to cry. Ok, let's go close the windows. On her way she remembers the sound of the thing that seemed to be something big that fell earlier, whyyy did I remember, she thought. Fast, she closes each one of the windows, and finaly goes for the last, in the bedroom. What the hell? Why is the floor wet, it's not windy enough for the rain to come inside. What a bother. She closes the window... and hears footsteps? "Oh my, oh shit". She turns and grabs the closest object that she could use as a weapon. "A pen? Ok, it's sharp...", don't have time to think.

As she slowly follows the wet footsteps on the floor, she starts seing leaves. Leaves!? Footsteps?! Hah. She walks around the house, following; that's strange, she's already checked the entire house when closing the windows, even the bathroom. "What the he-" BAAAAM. Again, the sound, that damn sound that started everything. Where the hell did the cat come from?! She's closed everything. The cat is wet, he goes straight to his tiny bed under the table. She enters her bedroom again; she doesn't want to, but she sees it. The window is open. The pen falls. But what is that... is that an envelope? She takes it before it gets all wet, and closes the window. What could the content be? She opens it; there's a message inside written with a nice caligraphy, but this is not the time to think about that. "I'M BACK.". Say whaaat? Who's back? Oh my god, am I by myself with a raper at my house? I'm over. She started shaking a little. But there's another message inside. It says "Look at your bed.", and there, she sees the most beautiful flowers, with a small box and a big box beside it. Those are the flowers she cherishes the most, why...?! She looked around to see if someone was watching her, but there was no one. The flowers smell really nice. Ok, small box first. When she opens it, a little paper falls, it says "To my dear one". There's a necklace, a beautiful necklace. And now the big box. It's a chocolate cake! On the cake it's written "Happy Birthday!". She's dazzled. When She turns, she starts crying. It was the most simple thing, yet she was the happiest person in the universe. There he was, staring at her carefully to not let that woman escape from his sight; he opens his arms: "hah, I really love you", he tells her, with a firm and charming voice. She runs, hugs him tightly, kisses him. There he is, the man, MY man. "I missed you.".

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